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It starts when you wander down a desolate road. . .

empty cabin

You look up and find the sky is strange . . .

lowering sky

Ahead, there is a smooth green expanse. . .

smooth, green, and dangerous

Do not put a foot to it. You will slip through, and under. The green will close above you, and be just as still and smooth as it was before. No one will know what has become of you, and no one who passes by the green place will suspect you lie below.


Date: 2011-07-28 02:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cucumberseed.livejournal.com
I hope this posts.

Do not put a foot to it. You will slip through, and under. The green will close above you, and be just as still and smooth as it was before. No one will know what has become of you, and no one who passes by the green place will suspect you lie below.

*shiver*

So, a story?

Date: 2011-07-28 03:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] asakiyume.livejournal.com
So, a story?

I think probably so, but not sure when. Right now Pen Pal's got its talons in me.

Date: 2011-07-28 03:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cucumberseed.livejournal.com
I am cheering on the talons!

Date: 2011-07-28 03:08 am (UTC)
sovay: (Haruspex: Autumn War)
From: [personal profile] sovay
You look up and find the sky is strange . . .

I'm hearing David Byrne narrating this . . .

Date: 2011-07-28 03:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] asakiyume.livejournal.com
Well, he entered my head, too, about the time I wrote the subject line :-P

Date: 2011-07-28 06:56 am (UTC)
sovay: (PJ Harvey: crow)
From: [personal profile] sovay
Well, he entered my head, too, about the time I wrote the subject line

You may have to make him a character.

Date: 2011-07-28 07:25 pm (UTC)
sovay: (Morell: quizzical)
From: [personal profile] sovay
Coated in duckweed

It won't be any stranger than some of the things he's worn.

Date: 2011-07-28 03:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] barry-king.livejournal.com
There is a meadow nearby which is about thirty years further into the process of beaverization. At this point, the soil has filled in, but the ground is still perfectly flat and absolutely solid with horsetail. At certain times of the year, it looks similar to your green expanse, but clouded with plants, like a green mist on water.

Date: 2011-07-28 03:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] asakiyume.livejournal.com
*shiver*

You'll definitely never be recovered once the horsetails and soil take hold.

(I used to be scared of horsetails, because they looked like snakes. I told my sister they were called vemin (sic--I was thinking of venom, but that's not what I said) shooters.)

Date: 2011-07-28 03:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yamamanama.livejournal.com
Before the dinosaurs were around, there were forests of giant horsetails.

Date: 2011-07-28 05:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] asakiyume.livejournal.com
I think of that sometimes, when I see them, or when I see tall ferns--or ginko trees. Ancient ancient species.

Date: 2011-07-28 03:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yamamanama.livejournal.com
That green expanse looks like somewhere swans like to hang out. Are there any stories or legends or dreams about people wandering into swamps and becoming swans?

Date: 2011-07-28 04:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] duccio.livejournal.com
Or people who lose it when they see that green pool's expanse, begin to imagine themselves to be... swans, maybe, and slip off into that green, floating island world to shake off their mortal coil. Actually, I think this happens all the time. No one notices (or maybe they do) that their acquaintance is slipping under, maybe never to be known here again.

Date: 2011-07-28 05:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] asakiyume.livejournal.com
This--this is exactly how it is.

Date: 2011-07-28 04:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] duccio.livejournal.com
All three are really interesting photographs, moody and evocative. They contain many stories.

At the auction place I go to monthly, often there will be a painting of dark nights with cloudy skies, like your second photo.

Date: 2011-07-28 05:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] asakiyume.livejournal.com
Such clearly visible yet unreachable drama--such architectures and furies and glories. We see it, we feel the effects--but can't touch or be in that sky ocean.

Date: 2011-07-28 12:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mnfaure.livejournal.com
The second photo looks like a view of the ocean from beneath the water, with the waves rolling, rolling over you.

Re: "You will slip through, and under"

I often go walking alone, and as you know, I wander around a bit in search of edible plants. I have this fear of falling into a hole or the covered cellar of a long-gone house and dying there because no one knows where I am. :(

Date: 2011-07-28 05:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] asakiyume.livejournal.com
Haven't been able to reply all day, though I've been thinking of you! Is your area one of the parts of France that's seen a lot of depopulation? (And thus has abandoned houses here and there?) It's like that in parts of New England, too--it was a more settled area in the 1800s than it is now, in places (though where I am, there's since been an uptick in population again).

Be prudent! I don't want you to slip into a cellar.

... I must find your link on milkweed silk, if LJ will let me get to your LJ. I have a feeling we're approaching the milkweed silk season, now.
Edited Date: 2011-07-28 05:48 pm (UTC)

Date: 2011-07-28 07:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mnfaure.livejournal.com
Many, many houses are abandoned in my village (due to the mechanization of grape harvesting), but out where I go walking, I think people have known for centuries that it is susceptible to floods and have not built many houses there. There may be abandoned wells, etc., but I think it is more paranoia on my part than real danger.

Don't know if you were successful with accessing my lj; if not, here is the link for milkweed: http://foragersharvest.com/milkweed-a-truly-remarkable-wild-vegetable/

(My post on milkweed is the 6th one that pops up on google when you do a search for "milkweed wildcrafting silk." :P

Date: 2011-07-28 11:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] asakiyume.livejournal.com
I got your comment by e-mail and went to the page--and have picked some pods. **fingers crossed**

Date: 2011-07-29 09:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mnfaure.livejournal.com
I'm going to go looking for pods today, too, so fingers doubly crossed. :P

Date: 2011-07-28 06:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] desert-sparrow.livejournal.com
You could have been the writer for The Invaders, which I consider to have had the finest written intro in television.
http://youtu.be/uOLGrXOtuwQ

Date: 2011-07-28 06:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] asakiyume.livejournal.com
I have never seen that show but those introductory credits are marvelous!

Date: 2011-07-28 07:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] desert-sparrow.livejournal.com
The sequence of your photos and captions mirrored David Vincent’s lonely country road. You only lacked the landing of a craft from another galaxy. Or did you?

Date: 2011-07-28 11:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] asakiyume.livejournal.com
Perhaps that's what lies beneath that smooth green surface.

Date: 2011-07-29 12:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] desert-sparrow.livejournal.com
Beautiful photos, I should have prefaced.

Date: 2011-07-29 01:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] asakiyume.livejournal.com
Very glad you liked them.

Date: 2011-07-28 07:04 pm (UTC)
ext_22858: (Default)
From: [identity profile] writeonq.livejournal.com
Hauntingly beautiful! And even more treacherous at night, no doubt, with deceptively pretty fairy lights and echoes of lullabys that entice one towards the water!

Date: 2011-07-28 11:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] asakiyume.livejournal.com
Definitely with music and lights, come the nighttime.

Date: 2011-07-29 12:37 am (UTC)
eseme: (Default)
From: [personal profile] eseme
Your photos and words are so lovely! I have been enjoying your photo-essays (when I can get to them).

Thank you for your art.

Date: 2011-07-29 01:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] asakiyume.livejournal.com
It's my pleasure--thank you for stopping by to take a look.

Date: 2011-07-29 11:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jtglover.livejournal.com
Lovely, as always. I wonder what's under there.

Date: 2011-07-29 12:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] asakiyume.livejournal.com
Hapless victims that don't know they've drowned! Giant eels!

Date: 2011-07-29 01:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jtglover.livejournal.com
Vegetal folk (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Man-Thing)!

Date: 2011-08-01 01:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] asakiyume.livejournal.com
Yes THAT!

Date: 2011-07-29 12:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cottonmanifesto.livejournal.com
whoa i have never seen so much duckweed in my life!

Date: 2011-07-29 12:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] asakiyume.livejournal.com
It was surreal. It really looked like it might be solid, like rock or glass, with dead trees embedded in it.

Date: 2011-07-30 03:24 am (UTC)
seajules: (jenny greenteeth)
From: [personal profile] seajules
Down here, that smooth green expanse would be hiding at least one gator, and still no one would know what had become of you. They could guess, though.

I do love your pictures, and here's hoping this comment goes through.

Date: 2011-07-30 02:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] asakiyume.livejournal.com
It did come through!

I imagine something huge and serpentlike under there. Or, the green itself is a mouth.

Date: 2011-07-30 03:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pdlloyd.livejournal.com
I love the way you wove this story around the photos, or perhaps it was the other way around and you found exactly the right photos for the story. I'm also very impressed by your story's brevity and creepiness and wonderfulness. Thank you for sharing this.

Date: 2011-07-30 02:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] asakiyume.livejournal.com
The photos came first-when I saw the green water, I started thinking.....

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