this evening, two different times

[asakiyume]

First, let me tell you what the parking lot at the supermarket was like, around 5:45 pm, on my way home. There was a smell of cinnamon, maybe from someone's discarded gum, and the sun was at the edge of a tide of rain-colored clouds, and there were goldfinches somewhere nearby--you couldn't see them, but you could hear them.

Now let me show you what the sky was like closer to home, about an hour later.

Comments

[asakiyume]

"Here, wear this garment to your sunset," they said.

(love your poem)

[amaebi]

I like that added bit, and add to it--
And the birds sing.

[asakiyume]

Perfect