A game--the 7-7-7-7 challenge
Sep. 17th, 2015 09:58 am![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png)
Disclaimer: I more often than not don't play these games, so if I tag you and you're not feeling up to it, no worries at all. I completely understand. Sometimes the stuff on the seventh page at the seventh line isn't what you feel like sharing! And sometimes the magics don't align right for sharing. But if you feel like it. Oh, and pretty much everyone I know loves to write, so if I don't tag you, don't hang back--the more the merrier.
The Game
Go to the 7th page of a work in progress, go 7 lines down, post the next 7 lines, then challenge 7 other writers to do the same.
... So here is something from the novel I'm inching along on, under the working title Diet of Clouds
Y'know, this is one of those excerpts which is kind of a head scratcher taken out of context. Lots of made-up names and not much happening. Takinat is a game played with feathers. All the named characters speak a language that the narrator doesn't speak. Para's teaching the narrator one word of it--tsare--which means "sea eagle." The feathers the narrator's going to use in the game come from a sea eagle.
I'm going to tag some people on Twitter, too, but here I'd like to tag
queenoftheskies,
mnfaure,
osprey_archer, and
blairmacg--if any of you feel inclined.
heliopausa, thinking of you, but understanding that you're occupied right now. But if this would be an entertaining break...
PS. One way to make this less daunting is definitely to drop that final seven. Tagging seven people! For one thing, with a geometric progression of seven, you run out of people pretty quickly. So yeah--maybe just make it the 7-7-7 challenge and then just tag one or two people.
PPS. I forgot to add that the person who tagged me was
cafenowhere! Thank you for nudging me. (You can read her entertaining snippet--much more coherent in its seven lines--here.)
The Game
Go to the 7th page of a work in progress, go 7 lines down, post the next 7 lines, then challenge 7 other writers to do the same.
... So here is something from the novel I'm inching along on, under the working title Diet of Clouds
“Sarray” I said.
She shook her head. “Tsare,” she repeated. I tried again, and again she shook her head. Ambat said something under his breath to Citak, who swallowed a laugh. Para frowned.
“Say again,” she ordered. I tried again, and this time she smiled and nodded.
“Let’s play,” she said, dropping to her knees and drawing a wide circle.
“What did Ambat say, before Takinat?” I asked her, sometime later.
Y'know, this is one of those excerpts which is kind of a head scratcher taken out of context. Lots of made-up names and not much happening. Takinat is a game played with feathers. All the named characters speak a language that the narrator doesn't speak. Para's teaching the narrator one word of it--tsare--which means "sea eagle." The feathers the narrator's going to use in the game come from a sea eagle.
I'm going to tag some people on Twitter, too, but here I'd like to tag
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PS. One way to make this less daunting is definitely to drop that final seven. Tagging seven people! For one thing, with a geometric progression of seven, you run out of people pretty quickly. So yeah--maybe just make it the 7-7-7 challenge and then just tag one or two people.
PPS. I forgot to add that the person who tagged me was
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Date: 2015-09-17 02:24 pm (UTC)no subject
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Date: 2015-09-17 02:40 pm (UTC)I'm so glad you are inching along and sticking with it!
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Date: 2015-09-17 02:50 pm (UTC)no subject
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Date: 2015-09-17 06:22 pm (UTC)Advice I heartily need to follow...and never do!
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Date: 2015-09-17 04:17 pm (UTC)Come to think of it, games must be an interesting way to enter a language. Like commercials, they give us a rather hyperbolic impression of a culture's priorities.
Thanks for playing the 7-7-7-7 game with me!
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Date: 2015-09-17 05:37 pm (UTC)I don't know about games, but songs give you an interesting route into a language. You learn all sorts of words like betrayal and heartbreak and regret before you learn, say, how to say roadmap or plate or supermarket (maybe... you might learn those words in songs, too--but you know what I mean).
I mean, I just learned a new word of Spanish: bailar. It comes up a lot in songs.
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Date: 2015-09-18 03:47 pm (UTC)Of course, the first song that popped into my head: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xMRJHvhX358
hyperbolic impression of a culture's priorities.
re: I was thinking about how some games have turn-taking built in, or stress competition over cooperation, or put a lot of value in keeping "possession" of something they're chucking around anyway.
But point well taken, re: songs giving us an "in" to abstract but important concepts not usually covered in textbooks!
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Date: 2015-09-18 03:53 pm (UTC)And vigorous nodding about games. It's probably also instructive to look at games played in lots of different countries and see the different flavors given them--like how baseball is different here, in Japan, and in Cuba, say, or how soccer is different depending on where it's played.
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Date: 2015-09-18 04:51 pm (UTC)YES, that would be so cool! Also, probably the only way you could get me to watch sports, period.
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Date: 2015-09-17 05:30 pm (UTC)And I remembered, with a painful clarity, the feel of him beneath my fingers: the muscle so close to the frictionless skin, the heat it generated into the water around him, like a tangible halo.
The need to touch him was so strong. I shoved my fingers into my armpits and trapped them there. “Of course I’m proud of you,” I said, when I found my voice again. “But you shouldn’t be here. What drove you into the river waters? Why did you come?”
The serpent lowered his head until it was on level with mine.
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Date: 2015-09-17 05:31 pm (UTC)Thank you so much for playing!!
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Date: 2015-09-17 05:41 pm (UTC)The challenge is that the character has a very specific voice and I want to make sure I get it right. The sentences need to be shorter or longer depending on what they're talking about... it's part of how you get the sense of how emotionally engaged the narrator is. That's the kind of thing I need to tidy. :)
But I am glad to be moving on this project. I need some sea serpent time. Plus, I want my romance novel to look more like the romance series it's supposed to be, so I can put book 1 on sale! >.>
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Date: 2015-09-17 05:31 pm (UTC)This brings tears to my eyes. For so many complicated reasons.
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Date: 2015-09-17 06:24 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2015-09-18 12:22 am (UTC)And very good news that you are writing!
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Date: 2015-09-18 12:57 am (UTC)“We’ll try this again.”
I tried to kick him in the junk, found I couldn’t move my legs. I could only manage a groan.
He said to his subordinate, “we’ll try again tomorrow. Just leave him here.” The room was cramped and dingy and lit by sodium lamps.
I thought of cursing at him, but only breath came out. I felt blood on my lip, tried to sniff it back upwards.
-From Revolution of Flowers
It seems Appleworks and Livejournal disagree on how long a line is.
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Date: 2015-09-18 02:20 am (UTC)(And as I said above before I erased the comment--you will definitely like Alif the Unseen)
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Date: 2015-09-18 02:22 am (UTC)Also, Emma has a painting in Boston's city hall.
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Date: 2015-09-18 02:23 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2015-09-18 02:39 am (UTC)Many talents, in fact.
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Date: 2015-09-18 04:16 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2015-09-18 03:54 pm (UTC)I'm happy so many others have joined in too!
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Date: 2015-09-18 09:06 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2015-09-20 01:13 pm (UTC)How about you? Tinkering on things?
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