Something gold, something fiery

[asakiyume]

Something gold, something fiery
slipping from a sky-cast net
peeking through pines
flaming, molten,
along the line of the hills

Comments

[heliopausa.livejournal.com]

I like the "sky-cast net" - the sun as subtle fish (or bird?). (and like an inside-out of of Omar Khayyam's Hunter of the East! :) )

and while we're on subtle golden fish - have you seen the fish subtly using a jelly fish as water-trail-breaker?

[asakiyume.livejournal.com]

I did see that little fish! With his own suit of jellyfish armor. What a bewildering situation for both creatures!