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asakiyume ([personal profile] asakiyume) wrote2010-08-28 08:27 am
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Para-amnesia

Para-amnesia

I woke, and even recognizing the room
Didn't know where I was
Even repeating my name
Didn't know who I was.
I wandered down a path
Familiar only as dreams are
Whose next turn I could not predict
Though when I found myself
At last at a seashore
Of round gray stones,
I nodded, sure
That this was my destination.


[identity profile] b-oki.livejournal.com 2010-08-28 02:07 pm (UTC)(link)
beautiful.

and what a better place to find oneself :)

[identity profile] mguibord.livejournal.com 2010-08-28 03:27 pm (UTC)(link)
"Familiar as only dreams are"
I loved this line. You have captured something so lovely and fleeting here.

[identity profile] cucumberseed.livejournal.com 2010-08-28 03:30 pm (UTC)(link)
And clearly it was.
It may just be the dreams I was having, but I felt a hint of menace lurking behind it.

[identity profile] bogwitch64.livejournal.com 2010-08-28 04:59 pm (UTC)(link)


(I gave you these sparkles because they're called, "mermaidy." It fit!)
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[personal profile] snakypoet 2010-08-29 05:35 am (UTC)(link)
I was nodding with you at the end, at the rightness of being there.
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[personal profile] pjthompson 2010-08-30 02:15 am (UTC)(link)
love it.

[identity profile] deponti.livejournal.com 2010-08-30 09:53 am (UTC)(link)
Truly lovely words. I just hummed them to music...they sounded wonderful.