ext_37027 ([identity profile] asakiyume.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] asakiyume 2016-10-16 11:53 pm (UTC)

Families in general evaporate. It's all about your age cohort--no one else exists. (A generalization. I can think of stories where this isn't true.)

I'd be happy just for an acknowledgement that the MC's lives are more full and rich than what appears "on screen." A birthday card from Aunt Somebody, a calendar note to go to a nephew's school play (if the writer is committed to having the MC be an unattached young thing). Or even if they hated their family and fled it, a reminder of what they left behind! We don't just pop into the universe at 22! We have ties.

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